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Moko
04-11-2012, 11:59 PM
I'll Try...


I can do it, yes I can; I don't have to be what I am.


I'll Try to move forward and never look back;

I'll run the race of life's race track;

Learn from my mistakes, pray then forget;

I'll never look in regret!




I'll Try and be strong, in emotion and Spirit, I know I can do it!

With God on my side, and with a killing of my pride,

I know... I can do it, why can't I?




I Can smile, and not need to cry;

I can laugh and not need to sigh;

I can live in peace, I have no need of fear,

Dear God draw me near!




I Will be what I should be, and do what I should do;

Love who he loves, and do what he does;

I'll be God's little one.



I'll Remember, I'm loved.

Thank You for loving me, I love you too.
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I hope some1 liked it, if not thank you for reading anyway. :P




~ God Bless ~




~ Moko

|uK|Grimreaper
04-13-2012, 03:49 AM
i cant find the like button wtf?

Bolous
04-13-2012, 05:18 AM
its ok ...
not so good , no use for big words and you uses the most simple rhyme ... but good job go on :D

Moko
04-14-2012, 02:27 PM
I was aiming more for sentiment than fanciness, but I'm glad you liked it!

I think the buttons are back BunnyHopper. XD